Sunday, February 19, 2012

The Small Stream Monster

Another post from the pages of the journal last season. I'm not quite sure where this came from but I sat down and wrote this after catching the wild brown pictured below.




Beneath the undercut in the cold water and shade
The small stream monster lies in wait
For his next victim be it from water or air
He'll strike precise from his daytime lair

While high above on the bank I stalk
Placing each step to reveal no walk
Through trees and weeds I drop my fly
Within feet of the monsters daytime lie

The fly has yet to make a twitch
When the monster engulfs him lightning swift
He makes a run that is deep and strong
Trying his best to undo this wrong

In the cool of the flow he comes to hand
His beauty a product of this wild land
A quick release will be his fate
And once again he lies in wait




12 comments:

  1. This angler likes that.
    Wonderful words.

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  2. Bill, another side of you come out. Nice job on the fish and the written matter!

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    1. Thanks Mel! I'm not sure when or if this side will show itself again. lol

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  3. Splendid! I too have found poetry rambling around my brain lately. Maybe it's the search for fewer words and more meaning.

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    1. You may be onto something there. Thanks!

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  4. Damn good, really. I saw you sneaking along the bank!

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  5. ...he lies in wait.

    great writing!

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